IELTS Academic writing task 1

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Introduction

Your introduction should be quite impressive as it makes the first impression on the examiner. It could potentially make or break your overall score!

If there are multiple graphs and each one presents a different type of data, you can write which graph represents what type of data and use ‘while’ to show a connection.

For example: The given bar graph shows the amount spent on fast food items in 2009 in the UK, while the pie chart presents a comparison of people’s ages who spent more on fast food.

For multiple graphs and/ or table(s), you can write what they present in combination instead of saying which each graph depicts.

For example: The two pie charts and the column graph in combination provide a picture of the crime rate in Australia from 2005 to 2015 and the percentages of young offenders during this period.

Your introduction alone should be about 20 to 30 words.

General overview

You can write your introduction (paraphrasing the question) and General overview in the same paragraph, or you can also write both in separate paragraphs. It doesn’t really matter which you chose, but you will have to write both!

Never provide any data (give numbers, percentages or quantity) in your general overview. You only start discussing the data in detail in the in-depth part. So, you should give the most striking features of the graph that could be easily understood at a glance.

  • In your general overview do not write:
    • At first glance the graphs reveals that 70% of the male were employed in 2001, while 40 thousand women in this year had jobs.
  • Instead write:
    • At first glance the graphs reveals that more men were employed than their female counterparts in 2001 and that almost two-third of the females were jobless in the same year.

Your Introduction (paraphrasing the question + general overview) should have a word count of about 75 – 80 words.

In-depth analysis

Your in-depth analysis is the next part of your writing and the biggest chunk of the task. So, it should have about 75-80 words. Combined with the 75-80 words of your introduction and General overview you have your 150 to 160 words. This means you have covered the 150 word count.

Depending on the question, you can either use 1 or 2 paragraphs for the body of the in-depth analysis. Just remember to group things together logically.

Conclusion

There is no need to write a conclusion for Academic IELTS writing task 1. So, don’t waste your time writing one, focus on your general overview and in-depth analysis, that’s where you score your points.

General tips

Take time to analyse and plan your writing, these are essential parts of any writing. It makes sure you know what you are writing about and it saves time when you are writing.

Write in pencil, that way you can easily correct your mistakes in the final 2 minutes, as well as replace words by synonyms if you are using the same words too often.

How to score well on task achievement  

You need to:

  • Analyse the graph(s) well and write about the most noticeable things. Do not write about everything you see, you only have 150 words. Only the things that are very clear at first glance. You just have a minute or 2 to analyse the graph and then start writing about it.
  • Compare the data, not just list it. Do not write:  25% watching TV, 35 % surfing the net. Write: there are more people surfing the net (35%) than watching TV (25%).
  • Provide a general overview without data: this is the part after your introduction where you just write approximately 2 sentences about the most noticeable data, without using numbers.
  • Have an in-depth analysis with data. This is the part where you start using the numbers and details from the graph.
  • Do not go off-task and speculate/ write about what you think but is not in the graph. Do not write: I think there was an increase in unemployment because of the global economic crisis. Women socialize more because unlike men they enjoy talking with the girlfriends and. There are more and more TVs in households, for example my family loves watching TV and we have 3 TVs ourselves. You just need the analyse the data and write a very dry and boring report!
  • Have at least 150 words, if you do not reach your word count you will be penalized and your score will go down.

How to score well on cohesion and coherence

You have to:

  • Follow the overall structure, paraphrase the question, General overview, in-depth analysis.
  • Separate your paragraphs: just leave 1 empty line between them.
  • Make more complex sentences.
  • Work on your punctuation, so no sentences which are paragraphs long. 

How to score well on your lexical range

You should:

  • Make sure you have a wide vocabulary and know how to use it correctly.
  • Uses synonyms as much as possible, try not to use the same word more that once or twice.
  • Use a variety of words to describe the data, use good verbs, nouns, adjectives and adverbs.
  • Especially use adverbs and adjectives when describing trends/changes. Don’t write: unemployment went down, instead write: unemployment went down significantly. There was a gradual increase in

How to score well on grammatical range and accuracy

You must:

  • Make sure you use a variety of grammatical structures.
  • Check your punctuation and correct it where needed.
  • When you finish your writing, take 2 minutes to read it again and check for mistakes. We all make them, especially when we are stressed. You know you have difficulty with articles, prepositions, tenses, and other small silly mistakes. Just checking at the end and correcting will not only boost your accuracy score but also your overall score.

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