That would be an understatement, I absolutely love travelling. Most of my free time I try to go on a trip. Still, I don’t always leave the country, that’s for longer holidays when I have a week or more.
I would say yes, still I don’t travel as much as I used to. I’m too busy with work right now, so I don’t have a lot of free time. But, we still travel during the summer holidays with the kids.
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definitely, in an era which is dominated by grim new and urban fatigue i find my self in need of traveling to some where to unwind,relish and relax. unfortunately, these days i am preoccupied with my hectic lifestyle as a result of running a fast moving world, i cannot travel as i used to.
Hello Sali,
Thanks for your comment. It has a lot of advanced language, but it is a bit too much and over the top. It also sounds a bit scripted. You have to be careful with that if the examiner feels that you memorized the answer he will not take it into account, so you won’t get any points there. The second part of the answer I would keep, the first part with the urban fatigue I would change to make it sound more natural. It in the end it should sound like how you would talk to someone new. They way you you wrote it is not how you would talk.
Hope it helps,
Kristof